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A Student's Guide to the Fundamentals of Filmmaking

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Anatomy of a Scene: Stakes & Steaks in GLENGARRY GLEN ROSS (1992)

Published by Gabe Moura, on October 31, 2016

Scenes are the dramatic units of films — the building blocks of cinematic storytelling. It is said that scenes should have a beginning, middle, and end. Additionally, all scenes should also have a goal, move the story forward, and present an emotional shift for at least one of the characters.

On a tightly constructed film, no scene is wasted! Whereas first-time writers focus on twists and big events, connecting the dots between “exciting moments” to fill in the pages, a skilled writer knows that every scene must be infused with purpose and exciting in its own right.

Analyzing film scenes is an amazing process to learning the craft of screenwriting. In this series, Anatomy of a Scene, we read or watch a scene from a movie and deconstruct it, asking ourselves what the writer intended to do. Does it work? Why or why not? And of course, what makes the scene great? Or awful?

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GLENGARRY GLEN ROSS (1992)

Spoilers level: low

Today under the spotlight is the David Mamet-scripted GLENGARRY GLEN ROSS, where we will focus on the 7 pages from Act I that kick the story in motion — a story beat often called Inciting Incident. Because this scene takes place between pages 8 and 15 (very early in the story), you can proceed to read it even if you haven’t seen the movie. As a quick set-up, the story revolves around a group of real estate agents. The scene at hand starts in the middle of page 8:

Notice how the very first paragraph in this scene introduces the setting with a description of “the large banner proclaiming ‘Rio Rancho Estates'”. Right after that, we get a sense of the real estate agents with the following exchange in which Aaronow broods over a failed sale. To which Levene responds, “You let her check with her lawyer…?” This conversation is important because it establishes the universe of the film within their contextual obstacles of making a sale (this is what they live for).

Glengarry Glen Ross alec baldwin speech

At the end of page 8, the antsy Aaronow spots someone new talking to their boss (note how quickly we get here; half a page into the scene). Immediately, there’s a sense that something is out of the ordinary (“Who is the guy…?”). After all, a movie about realtors in their regular routines would be boring. So what the audience needs — much like these characters — is a day different from the others, with higher stakes and an overwhelming pressure to close contracts. [Read more…]

Filed Under: Screenwriting Tagged With: "Move the story forward", Anatomy of a Scene, David Mamet, Glengarry Glen Ross (1992), Inciting Incident, MacGuffin, Stakes, Structure

Anatomy of a Scene: “No Pattern on my Quarter” from THE WAY WAY BACK (2013)

Published by Gabe Moura, on October 17, 2016

Scenes are the dramatic units of films — the building blocks of cinematic storytelling. It is said that scenes should have a beginning, middle, and end. Additionally, all scenes should also have a goal, move the story forward, and present an emotional shift for at least one of the characters.

On a tightly constructed film, no scene is wasted! Whereas first-time writers focus on twists and big events, connecting the dots between “exciting moments” to fill in the pages, a skilled writer knows that every scene must be infused with purpose and exciting in its own right.

Analyzing film scenes is an amazing process to learning the craft of screenwriting. In this series, Anatomy of a Scene, we read or watch a scene from a movie and deconstruct it, asking ourselves what the writer intended to do. Does it work? Why or why not? And of course, what makes the scene great? Or awful?

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THE WAY WAY BACK

Spoilers level: low.

Today, we’re taking a closer look at scene 22, a total of 3 pages from the coming-of-age comedy-drama film THE WAY WAY BACK (2013) written by Nat Faxon and Jim Rash.

In case you are not familiar with the film, Duncan (played by Liam James) is a shy 14-year-old  teenager visiting a new town for the summer. Without further ado, here’s scene 22 one third into the page:

At first glance, you may think this scene is just about two dudes getting acquainted and teasing one another, vying for a sense of superiority. And that’s true, but what makes the scene so effective is how their personalities clash — so that what they argue to feel superior is lost on the other. Additionally, the scene is also filled with clever dialogue. Let’s break it down:

Scene 22 opens on Duncan buying a soft drink at a pizza joint. Notice how the writers efficiently (one paragraph) describe who’s hanging out here and what they’re doing. In the very next paragraph, we’re in a different location inside the main location — the BACK GAME ROOM where Guy/Owen plays Pac-Man.

As mentioned above, in true “fish out of water” fashion, Duncan doesn’t know anyone in this town. So the screenwriters create an analogy to this with the arcade games: “EXCEPT for the classic PAC-MAN upright, the rest of the video games are very 2012.” Here, the Pac-Man is the fish out of water, much like Duncan throughout the film. It is also a suggestion of the age gap between these two generations.

As Duncan approaches the game, immediately he’s reprimanded: “Do you mind standing to the side? I’m getting your reflection in the screen.” This movie sees Duncan making unintentional mistakes by simply existing. Naturally, this scene could be no different.

As the conversion continues at the bottom of page 24, we see how Duncan and Owen are out of sync (again, much like the newer arcade games and Pac-Man). While Owen considers it “the game of his life” surviving this long, Duncan is unimpressed, “But, that’s the first level.” This exchange quickly conveys how both men have contrasting senses of accomplishment and excellence, which sheds light on their diverging personalities.

The Way Way Back

After a quick dialogue about Pac Man, Duncan pretentiously declares: “You know, there’s a pattern.” — only to be shot down again — “Oh, don’t tell me you’re one of those guys. That takes all the challenge out of it. Anybody can learn a pattern.” With this, Owen pulls the rug from under Duncan, obliterating his sense of superiority. And we’re left to interpret. Perhaps Owen’s happiness is not dependent on winning, which is a timeless lesson worthy of philosophical discussions. But we don’t have time for that because…

Halfway through page 25 (also the scene’s half-point), Owen’s co-workers begin heading out and calling after him, which puts a clock on the scene. This is the motivation for Owen to hand the reins to Duncan, who promptly declines.

After more friendly banter where Duncan continues “spoiling” the game, Owen heads out, dispensing the scene’s wisdom — a synthesis of the theme that carries the movie: “Oh and hey, no pattern on my quarter, man. Cut your own path.” It’s a brilliant line that concludes the scene and sets up the rest of the movie. Duncan’s emotional journey/character arc is about “cutting his own path”. And again, we can interpret that phrase in a couple of ways: “Don’t follow anyone’s footsteps” or “Find your own happiness.” Regardless of the actual intended meaning, the line invites reflection.

And then, Pac-Man dies, symbolizing again how out of place and awkward Duncan is, unable to fit in and meet expectations — his “curse” throughout the film.

Final Thoughts

This scene is exquisite in execution because the writers get so much done in less than three pages! Sure, the comedic elements alone could justify the scene. But introducing characters, showcasing their differences, creating analogies and contrasts, and dispensing some philosophical and thematic wisdom over Pac-Man just puts this “little” scene in another level. Always aim to accomplish the most in as few pages as possible.

Filed Under: Screenwriting Tagged With: Anatomy of a Scene, Coming-of-Age, Dialogue, Jim Rash, Nat Faxon, The Way Way Back (1963), Theme

Anatomy of a Scene: Crushing Dreams in LITTLE MISS SUNSHINE (2006)

Published by Gabe Moura, on October 3, 2016

Scenes are the dramatic units of films — the building blocks of cinematic storytelling. It is said that scenes should have a beginning, middle, and end. Additionally, all scenes should also have a goal, move the story forward, and present an emotional shift for at least one of the characters.

On a tightly constructed film, no scene is wasted! Whereas first-time writers focus on twists and big events, connecting the dots between “exciting moments” to fill in the pages, a skilled writer knows that every scene must be infused with purpose and exciting in its own right.

Analyzing film scenes is an amazing process to learning the craft of screenwriting. In this new series, Anatomy of a Scene, we read or watch a scene from a movie and deconstruct it, asking ourselves what the writer intended to do. Does it work? Why or why not? And of course, what makes the scene great? Or awful?

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LITTLE MISS SUNSHINE

Spoilers level: high.

Today, we’re taking a closer look at 6 six pages that constitute one of the many unforgettable moments from LITTLE MISS SUNSHINE (2006) written by Michael Arndt. The scene starts off in the second half of page 70:

The scene begins with Olive testing her brother’s vision. Quickly, the writer misdirects us with Olive’s line, “20/20 vision!” Even before the conflict kicks in, the scene works because it is endearing to see the two siblings bonding. And if you recall from the movie, just a few scenes prior the whole family was mourning Grandpa’s death. After that, they ran into trouble with a state trooper and a hyperactive car horn. Therefore, this moment of diversion lets the audience breathe… before the next gut-punch. (Peaks and valleys of tension.)

On the first half of page 71, we move away from Olive and Dwayne to remind the audience that they are on a time crunch. As Frank announces the time, “Sharyl looks at Richard, who steps on the gas.” Richard’s line “We’ll make it, okay? Maybe a few minutes late” is immediately shot down by Sheryl’s “No, Richard…! They said three o’clock sharp! They were very explicit.” This brief exchange is important because…

Little Sunshine Dwayne's colorblind

Oliver tests Dwayne for colorblindness. And here’s when the scene’s conflict explodes. Since the beginning of the film, the audience has known that Dwayne wants to fly jets for the navy. It’s his dream, which he carries as an obsession. It’s the reason why he doesn’t speak (a vow of silence shows unwavering discipline). So when he learns that he’s colorblind, he’s entire life purpose disappears before his eyes (pun intended). And the author skillfully spells that out within the scene, gradually building to his breakdown:

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Filed Under: Screenwriting Tagged With: Anatomy of a Scene, Little Miss Sunshine, Michael Arndt, Scenes without Dialogue, Twist

Writing Strong Female Characters

Published by Gabe Moura, on September 25, 2016

Strong female characters

Sigourney Weaver in ALIEN (1979)

Though male protagonists have disproportionately dominated the movies since the dawn of time, with each passing year, we see more and more movies featuring powerful female characters, some are even spearheading their own franchises!

Dead are the days in which studio executives would cringe at the prospect of green-lighting movies led by heroines like the seminal Ellen Ripley (played by Sigourney Weaver) in ALIEN. Now, times have changed, and many producers want to make those movies!

You should not be surprised if you attend a development meeting, and a producer suggests demands gender-bending your macho script. To that and other ends, the following considerations might help you:

Flip Stereotypes into Strengths

Many of the negatively-charged adjectives sometimes associated with women are a matter of perception and an opportunity for a positive character trait. Isn’t “Emotional” just another word for Empathetic? Or “Irrational” for Rogue? Thus, “Fragile” becomes sensitive, and “Bitchy” becomes Assertive. Flip those negative perceptions into strengths and use them to elevate and empower your female characters.

Know the cliches and create something different

The trials and tribulations of creating strong female characters are not new. Ergo, many screenwriters have stumbled upon similar situations and scenarios that are now cliche. The more films and TV shows you watch, the more obvious they become. But here are few that you probably have noticed for yourself:

  • A female character who’s either… a lawyer, a doctor, a cop, a stripper
  • A female character whose backstory revolves around…a breakup, a dead child, parental abuse
  • A female character who expresses herself through… eating, crying, boxing, dancing

Knowing the cliches allows you to break free from the common and be innovative. Originality is your friend!

writing strong heroines

…because it was time a female Jedi had her own franchise!
STAR WARS: THE FORCE AWAKENS (2015)

What would a Super Hero do?

Instead of making a woman sleep with someone to get information, ask yourself: What would a Super Hero do?  Suggestion: Arm your woman to the teeth (if it’s an action flick). Let her break into the Pentagon, guns blazing, and steal the files!

Instead of making a woman agree to work through the weekend to be considered for a promotion, ask yourself: What would a Super Hero do? Suggestion: What if — through some creative problem-solving and a dash of risk-taking — she seals a very important deal and saves the company!

The point is: don’t let your perception of gender roles influence your story. At times, when the story demands it, it’s okay. But know when your creativity is being blocked by what you think is right.

Make a Good First Impression

Introducing characters on the page is often a challenge. But female characters specially have been plagued by descriptions that revolve around their looks.

Producers are catching on. And they are making fun of you behind your back! In fact, one such executive, Ross Putman, got so tired of reading the same mindless descriptions over and over again that he started tweeting them.

To preserve the anonymity of screenwriters, Mr. Putman has replaced the characters’ names with JANE, otherwise descriptions are verbatim from actual scripts:

A gorgeous woman, JANE, 23, is a little tipsy, dancing naked on her big bed, as adorable as she is sexy. *BONUS PTS FOR BEING THE 1ST LINE

– Ross Putman (@femscriptintros) February 10, 2016

Though drop-dead beautiful, JANE (40) has the appearance of someone whose confidence has been shaken. She is a raw, sexual force, impeded.

– Ross Putman (@femscriptintros) February 10, 2016

Notice how these examples are blatantly crude and sexist. And the problem is not just “political” or a “matter of opinion”. In practical terms, when your script goes out to attract prospective actresses, your word choices can be a deal-breaker.

Understand “Her” Story

When looking for inspiration to write a female-based story, consider that side female character in the “guy movie.” Be it the girlfriend, the daughter, the mother, the sister. Imagine a story from their perspectives, their obstacles, their hurdles. You can turn any of these side female characters into the protagonist of their own movies. The beauty and challenge of screenwriting is making the audience care about people. If you can understand a woman through her struggles, you are better equipped to write female characters. (The same is true if you are a woman writing male characters.)

Knowing aspects of the “female experience” can greatly improve your writing. And if you are a woman, you don’t want to overlook that. In SILENCE OF THE LAMBS, Clarice Starling has to deal with a lot of colleagues and superiors, most of who look down on her, taking her only for a “pretty face.” Arguably, the movie would have been less powerful had the writers ignored this kind of workplace sexism.

write strong female character

Sexism is just one obstacle Clarice has to overcome in the FBI
SILENCE OF THE LAMBS (1991)

Heighten the Conflict

What if Mom has to take the kids to school AND kill the terrorists? Don’t renegade your female character to the sidelines. Let her beat the odds and do the impossible!

The same applies to her goals.  In the film THE ASSOCIATE, Whoopi Goldberg plays an intelligent investment banker who fails to succeed in Wall Street on the account that she’s a black woman. When she’s failed to be taken seriously, she creates a fictitious white man to prove her worth.

Use the Bechdel Test

A 1985 comic strip by Alison Bechdel depicted two women talking about going to watch a movie. One of them explains her requirements for watching movies:

  1. The movie has to have at least two women in it,
  2. who talk to each other,
  3. about something besides a man

This simple rule doesn’t guarantee success, but it is useful as an additional parameter. Not that every movie needs to pass the test. (Clarice Starling doesn’t have any profound discussions with another woman in THE SILENCE OF THE LAMBS.) But know that some people are sick and tired of two women talking about a man!

(You can see the strip here.)

Any other thoughts? Comment below.

Filed Under: Screenwriting Tagged With: Alien, Main Character, Strong Women, The Silence of the Lambs

What is ISO (Film Speed)?

Published by Gabe Moura, on September 12, 2016

ISO is one of the three camera components that control photographic exposure:

The Exposure Triangle. The balance of these elements create "normal" exposure.

The Exposure Triangle. The balance of these elements creates “normal” exposure.

ISO stands for International Standards Organization. It is a numerical value used by digital and film cameras alike to define the light sensitivity of the recording medium. This numerical value can range from 25 to several thousands (digital filmmaking continues to push the technology and make chips that are more and more sensitive).

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Filed Under: Cinematography Tagged With: Camerawork, exposure, Photography

Question Spotlight: Is Filmmaking Fun? Is it worth it?

Published by Gabe Moura, on July 4, 2016

Ally sent the following question:

Hi! You should be very proud of yourself for fixing this article up (7 Basic Things All Future Film Directors Should be Doing Right Now), it’s very well done. Thank you for the tips!

I am fifteen and have an interest in this career. If all else fails, plan B is psychology. I love movies a lot and have grown to love them this past year and look deeply into them. I use it as an escape from my anxiety. I mostly love 80s and 90s movies.

Here are my questions…

1) My anxiety can get pretty bad and hold me back from trying new things and make me insecure. Would this mean that I shouldn’t go into this career?
2) I really love 80s movies, but would focusing on those movies blind me from what the general public wants today?
3) My Dad wants me to be a doctor or a lawyer while my Mom wants me to do this. Is it worth it? Is it a fun job, like do directors have fun making movies? Is it worth trying?
4) Is screenplay writing necessary? I’ve written books before on WattPad, but most of them are Fanfictions. I have a hard time coming up with my own stuff, but if I do, it’s normally based off of dreams I’ve had because I write my dreams down every morning.

I really love movies and want to be a part of the creation. I love them so much, I get depressions after watching them because I’m so sad they’re over sometimes. I make movies at home and got hired to make a commercial for a volunteer system for a contest. My Mom says I have talent, but she’s my Mom. I just really want to know if this is for me because I may only be a sophomore, but I hate not knowing what I want to do because I like having a plan. This caused a lot of my anxiety problems, which have actually been getting better. I hope they stay that way.

 

Hi Ally, thank you so much for your message. Let’s see if I can answer your questions:

1) My anxiety can get pretty bad and hold me back from trying new things and make me insecure. Would this mean that I shouldn’t go into this career?

I understand career anxiety. My wife and my brother — even me at times — feel a lot of it! I would say that most careers have to deal with some kind of anxiety. Definitely, being a lawyer or a doctor is NOT any easier in this respect. Especially if you are a director, you have to deal with a lot of pressure and deadlines, but this is true for any facet of filmmaking. From writing to editing, everyone has to deal with anxiety. If you really love movies and see yourself as a part of the process, my suggestion is that you take steps towards managing anxiety as much as you can, for this will help you regardless of the career path you take.

2) I really love 80s movies, but would focusing on those movies blind me from what the general public wants today?

You know, when I first fell in love for the movies and filmmaking, I was very focused on older classics, anything from the 1920s to 1980s. For some reason, I had the desire to know, understand, research and love the movies that came before me. At some point, however, I realized it could mean trouble for me. I’m not gonna lie to you, knowing and ENJOYING recent movies is probably mandatory because you have to know what everyone else is doing. Not only for the story in these movies, but also for the techniques being used. Also, you should know how the market works. Once you establish yourself, you can then try to make the movies you want, even if they defy common sense.

3) My Dad wants me to be a doctor or a lawyer while my Mom wants me to do this. Is it worth it? Is it a fun job, like do directors have fun making movies? Is it worth trying?

Make no mistake, there are moments of grief and struggle when everything goes to hell. The actor is late, the camera is acting up, the location manager wants you out by 5pm, a production assistant tripped on a cable and injured himself. And then, it starts raining! It happens. It can be soul-sucking at times. But the people that persevere and continue working on films do so because, at the end of the day, the joys and fun outweigh the heartache and the pains. It can be especially hard when you are starting out, and you have to climb the rungs of the industry till you find yourself in that dream job. But people still do it. So yeah, it’s worth trying!

4) Is screenplay writing necessary? I’ve written books before on WattPad, but most of them are Fanfictions. I have a hard time coming up with my own stuff, but if I do, it’s normally based off of dreams I’ve had because I write my dreams down every morning.

Screenwriting is NOT necessary. But a sense of good storytelling is. Films are narratives, and if you can’t distinguish a great story from a bad one, you’re in trouble. I definitely recommend you read books on screenwriting, but also read movie reviews and join discussions about the craft of storytelling. Ask yourself why does this work or doesn’t, and debate it with friends. You’ll see everyone has a different opinion and interpretation. Even if you don’t wanna be a screenwriter, you still need to understand screenwriting, so read screenplays. Probably start with the scripts from movies you like. Here’s a bunch of them: http://gointothestory.blcklst.com/free-script-downloads/ (Sorry these are mostly recent movies.)

As for  inspiration for coming up with your own stuff, know that it’s always a challenge. One technique that works for me is this: every time you have a movie idea, write it down. Don’t over analyze it. Sometimes the wackiest ideas are the best ones! Think of BACK TO THE FUTURE or JURASSIC PARK. In my head, they are almost laughable as concepts, but they work fantastically well on the screen because their execution is top-notch. The other side of this is is when ideas don’t feel complete or coherent. Even if they are fragments, write them down. Make that a habit! Get a notebook or a binder just for ideas. Later you will combine stuff and make two little ideas into a big one. Believe me: it happens. But first, you must. Write. It. Down!

Did I answer everything?

By the way, it’s awesome that you already started working on commercials at age 15. To answer your other question regarding what you can do at 15:

My suggestion is to continue filming as much as you can. Acquire (or borrow) a camera and start shooting. Do as many projects as you can and focus on completing them. It’s easy to, say, lose motivation after recording something. But, unless you have a good reason, you must force yourself to edit each project to completion. Learn from your mistakes. If you can’t finish a movie for whatever reason, understand what went wrong and do what you can to prevent that from happening again.

I’m not sure where you live, but some high schools have media programs that give you access to some equipment like cameras and editing suites. It’s always a good idea to look into it. If your school offers no such program, I also recommend you look into a local TV station, inquire if they have internships or courses you can take. These are usually  inexpensive (or free) if you can find a public program or institution. Be sure to ask around! Yet another option is to attend a community college in the summer. Because you are young and not really a full-time college student, you can just take whichever fun classes you want.

Thank you again, Ally! Comment below if you have any questions! Have a great day!

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Anyone else interested in this topic, refer to this page for more tips:

7 Basic Things All Future Film Directors Should be Doing Right Now

 

Filed Under: Directing Tagged With: Careers, question spotlight, Tips

Bibliography and References – Best Filmmaking Books

Published by Gabe Moura, on November 1, 2015

What follows below is a partial list of filmmaking books I have read throughout the years. Most of them were influential in helping me decide what kind of content I should include here on the Elements of Cinema. This list is by no means complete; more books will be added as I continue researching.

Important: although all of these books were part of my formation, please be advised they vary tremendously in terms of depth and detail. For instance, the book The Bare Bones Camera Course for Film and Video is an amazing read for someone who has never read a cinematography book and doesn’t know simple things like the aperture or shot sizes. In other words, this specific book is more on the basic side. Conversely, The Filmmaker’s Handbook has so much detail and information that reading the whole thing is almost impossible. It is a dense read. Before buying a book, please read the reviews carefully so you can get a grasp what kind of book it is, as well as its target audience.

The books listed here link to Amazon pages. If you make a purchase through Amazon, the Elements of Cinema may earn a small commission AT NO EXTRA COST TO YOU. It is a great way to support the site and help us help you with more content and lessons. 🙂 Thank you!

Should you want to go more in-depth on a certain topic, you can send me an email or buy some of these exceptional titles for an amazing read:

Directing

  • Directing Actors: Creating Memorable Performances for Film & Television
  • The Filmmaker’s Handbook: A Comprehensive Guide for the Digital Age: 2013 Edition*
  • Producing and Directing the Short Film and Video*

Screenwriting

  • How to Build a Great Screenplay: A Master Class in Storytelling for Film
  • Elements of Screenwriting: A Guide for Film and Television Writing
  • The Screenwriter’s Bible, 6th Edition: A Complete Guide to Writing, Formatting, and Selling Your Script (Expanded & Updated)

Cinematography

  • The Bare Bones Camera Course for Film and Video
  • The Filmmaker’s Handbook: A Comprehensive Guide for the Digital Age: 2013 Edition*

Editing

  • In the Blink of an Eye: A Perspective on Film Editing, 2nd Edition
  • On Film Editing: An Introduction to the Art of Film Construction

Producing

  • Producing and Directing the Short Film and Video*
  • The Pocket Lawyer for Filmmakers: A Legal Toolkit for Independent Producers

Sound Design

  • Producing Great Sound for Film and Video: Expert Tips from Preproduction to Final Mix

Others

  • Critical Focus: An Introduction to Film
  • All You Need to Know About the Movie and TV Business
  • The Major Film Theories: An Introduction
  • The Kid Stays in the Picture: A Notorious Life

* Books that appear in more than one category.

Remarks

It is worth reminding you that I also went to film school, and some of the observations or insights you will find in this blog sprouted up from class lectures and discussions with classmates, not always from books.  Also, of course, a lot of the knowledge comes from the Elements of Cinema Podcast where I interview pros from the industry and pick their brains.

The list above is provided for your reference in case you want to dig deeper on a certain subject. I urge you not to study filmmaking in a vacuum, alone. Whether you want to be the writer who sits behind a desk churning pages day in and day out, or the director who coordinates several departments and personnel, it is paramount that you understand how the business and the art co-exist. Use the reading material as a spring board for your “adventures” in filmmaking, and always, whenever possible, refer to more than one source.

Filed Under: Main

Logline Examples

Published by Gabe Moura, on October 25, 2015

loglineYesterday I answered a question about loglines. So today I wanted to give you some examples of loglines. Why, you ask.

Well, reading loglines is an interesting exercise because — if you don’t know how the movie unfolds — you are forced to imagine where the story might go.

Also, more importantly, observe how these long three-act feature movies  can be summarized in two sentences or less. As a writer, you will have to do the same for your story. A logline is an important “elevator pitch” if you are pressed for time.

Logline Examples from Produced Screenplays

logline-examples2THE SHAWSHANK REDEMPTION – Two imprisoned men bond over a number of years, finding solace and eventual redemption through acts of common decency.

RUSHMORE – A precocious private high school student whose life revolves around his school competes with its most famous and successful alumnus for the affection of a first grade teacher

THE SWEET SMELL OF SUCCESS – A press agent, hungry to get ahead, is pushed by a ruthless columnist to do cruel and evil things, and is eventually caught in the web of lies that he has created.

BIG NIGHT  – Two very different brothers promote their struggling 1950s New Jersey Italian restaurant by inviting Louis Prima and his band to take part in a sumptuous dinner there.
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Filed Under: Screenwriting Tagged With: Elevator Pitch, Logline, screenwriting, unproduced screenplays

Logline, Premise, and Synopsis

Published by Gabe Moura, on October 24, 2015

A couple of days ago Fiiya submitted the following question:

Can you explain the difference between a logline, premise and synopsis?”

Sure thing, Fiiya! Thank you for your question. Here you go:

 Logline

logline premise synopsisFor the purposes of conducting business in Hollywood (selling a screenplay, pitching a TV show, negotiating distribution) a Logline is a one- or two-sentence summary of your script. If absolutely necessary, you can do three sentences, but it should be as short as possible. It is designed to concisely introduce all the important elements of your story like the main character and conflict. Here are three examples for your reference:

A man with no name and a man with a mission hunt a Mexican bandit for different reasons. – FOR A FEW DOLLARS MORE (Sergio Leone, 1965)

Naïve Joe Buck arrives in New York City to make his fortune as a hustler, but soon strikes up an unlikely friendship with the first scoundrel he falls prey to. – MIDNIGHT COWBOY (John Schlesinger, 1969)

A self-centered hotshot returns home for his father’s funeral and learns the family inheritance goes to an autistic brother he never knew he had. The hotshot kidnaps this older brother and drives him cross-country hoping to gain his confidence and get control of the family money. The journey reveals an unusual dimension to the brother’s autism that sparks their relationship and unlocks a dramatic childhood secret that changes everything. – RAIN MAN (Barry Levinson, 1988)

Notice how loglines do not spoil the ending. Their purpose is to hook and intrigue the viewer so they accept to read your script or watch your movie. In practical terms, think of a writer who wants to have his or her script read by an agent or producer, or a filmmaker who wants to sell the distribution rights to a studio. To convince them to read/watch it, in addition to the right connections and the ever-elusive opportunity, an amazing logline will help!
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EOC 007: Lindsay Adams and “How to become a Production Assistant in Hollywood?”

Published by Gabe Moura, on September 7, 2015

Production-Assistant-CareerHello CinemaNation!

In this episode of the Elements of Cinema Podcast, I interview Lindsay Adams, a production assistant originally from Stillwater, Oklahoma.

I have to say I love this pattern I’ve noticed from most of my guests who were not born in Los Angeles and had to move here to follow a dream. Those kind of journeys are always more exciting, and we salute Lindsay for her zeal and passion that brought her to Hollywood.

Here’s the interview:

http://traffic.libsyn.com/elementsofcinema/EOC007.mp3

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Filed Under: podcast Tagged With: 2-Day Production Assistant Bootcamp (Crash Course), Lindsay Adams, Moving to Hollywood

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